The Power of Hope and Dream (Part I)

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Welcome back to my blog!!! What do think be my writing task this time? Do you know guys?

Okay, in this time I'll tell you about my narrative story. This narrative story was about human and angel' life. So, enjoy reading guys!!! :)

Once upon a time, there was a village called Miracle Village. That village was called Miracle Village because almost all people who live there believed that miracle does exist. They believed that their hope and their dream will make the miracle comes to their live. In that village, lived a grandmother named Mrs. Anne along with her grandson named John. Mrs. Anne had a little restaurant which was her livelihood to finance their life’s and to pay John’s school fee. John was an only child, because her father passed away and her mother left John with Mrs. Anne and some people said that John’s mother already got married with other man from other village. Although John knew that his mother still alive, he never tried to search his mother because he didn’t want to disturb her mother’s new family. John always thinks that he was very lucky although he didn’t live with his parents, because he had his beloved grandmother. Although Mrs. Anne lived alone since her husband passed away, she still a tough and hardworking person. Although Mrs. Anne only had a little restaurant, she can raise John well.

John was on his second grade in his Senior High School. John also a hardworking and easygoing person. He had good personalities that make his friends like to make a friend with him. Although almost students liked to make a friend with him, there are some students who didn’t like John at all. They were Jim, Neil and Max. They didn’t like John because he was a popular person in their school. They always try to make a problem with John, but John didn’t care about it. John only thought about how to make his grandmother happy and proud of him.

One day, Jim and his friends tried to trap John. At that time, it was a break time. So, all students include John went to the canteen and the class emptied. A few minutes later, Jim and his friends entered the class and took John’s bag. They put Max’s wallet in John’s bag. After that, they went out and joined others student at the canteen. When the bell rang, all students entered their class and started their next lesson. When the teacher explained about the lesson, Max said to his teacher that his wallet lost. All students in that class shocked, because they thought there was a thief in their class. The teacher decided to search from all students’ bag. The teachers searched students’ bag one by one, but when it was John’ bag turned all of them shocked. Max’s wallet was there!!! All students looked angry or pity to John. Some of them didn’t expect that John would do that, but some of them thought that it was normal because John wasn’t a rich student. Besides John’s classmate, John’s teacher also shocked. The teacher didn’t expect that John would thieve his friends things, because he knew that John was a good student. Although many times John said that he didn’t thieve Max’s wallet, the teacher still gave John a punishment. John had to get out from that school!!! The teacher didn’t want to made that decision, but the school’s rules were strict. The teacher couldn’t break the rules.

John apologized many times to his teacher, because he didn’t want to get out from that school. Although John had apologized, his teacher decision hadn’t changed. John had to get out from that school. Except if Max forgave John. After heard that reason, John was looking for Max to apologize. After looking for Max for one hour, John found that Max was at the rooftop school with his friends, Jim and Neil. When they saw John’s arrival, they smile. In front of Jim and his friends, John’s kneeled down to apologize although that wasn’t his fault. John said that he didn’t want to get out from that school, so John begged Max to forgive him. When they saw that John kneeled down for them, they laughed at John. They thought that they already defeated John.  Besides laughed at John, they also mocked John and John’s grandmother. If they only mocked John, he wouldn’t angry. Unfortunately, they also mocked John’s grandmother’ and it actually made John very angry. While Jim was mocking John’s grandmother, he punched Jim’s face and Jim fell down. Max was angry because John punched his friend like that. So, Max pushed John reached the edge of the perimeter wall of the building. John was surprised at the time and made ​​him unstable , so that it made John slipped and fell to the ground.

What do you think the continuation of this story guys? Are you curious?So, wait for the next part of this story guys…

Thank you for your time to read my narrative story. Please give some critics and suggestions on my blog guys, so I can improve my writing skill.