Thursday, May 5, 2016

The Power of Hope and Dream (Part II)

Hello guysss…
Welcome back to my blog!!!
Do you remember my last writing task about? Yap!!! It was about my narrative story. Last week was my first part story. And now, I’ll tell you about the next story. So, happy reading guys…
Max was angry because John punched Jim. So, Max pushed John reached the edge of the perimeter wall of the building. John was surprised at the time and made ​​him unstable, so that it made John slipped and fell to the ground. Jim and friends surprised and scared, so they left immediately. Luckily, something happened when John fell to the ground. John didn’t fall to the ground, but he flew in the air. When he looked down, there was a girl who held him. For a minute they still flew, but a few minutes later they fell together and fainted.
When John woke up, he surprised because he was in a hospital. Next to him, there was a girl which was still fainted. When John asked the nurse who she was, the nurse said that that girl came with him. John realized that that girl saved his life. While John was looking at her, she woke up.
“Who are you?” asked John.
That girl just looked around and asked John back, “Are you talking to me?”.
John looked a little close to that girl’s face and replied, “Of course you. Who else? I was in front of you, so that I asked you“.
She touched herself and asked to John again, “Can you look at me? How can?”.
John thought that that girl got an amnesia because she had helped him before. So, he said, “It’s okay if you didn’t remember who you are. Now, come with me. I’ll take you to the police office, maybe your family searched you”.
When she got up from her bed, she realized that her book lost. She was looking for her book. John came to that girl and asked what she was looking for. That girl didn’t say anything. John, asked her one more times and she answered that her book lost.
“What kind of book? A diary?” asked John
 “ My book like a note book, has brown cover and it was thick enough. There was an important book for me.” she replied. John confused. John asked nurses if they knew that girl’s book, but all of them didn’t know her book. They said that they didn’t see that that girl brought a book. John told that girl that he would help her to find her book, but she had to follow John to the police office. That girl agreed and they went out from that hospital. While they were walking around the street, immediately that girl called someone at the other street and she looked like she was talking with someone. John looked at the other street but he didn’t see anything. While she was talking by someone, John pulled her hand and said that she had to go to the police office now. Before everything be worse. At the police office, that girl said her name was Sally but she didn’t remember her address. John confused, what should he do to that girl. While he was thinking, his grandmother phoned and he told her everything. Because his grandmother told him to take that girl to their home, so he asked the police officer and went with that girl.
 Since that, Sally became a human for a while. She lived with John and Mrs. Anne. Sally  also school at John’s school to made them believed that she was a human. A person who was called by Sally in that street was her friend. A male angel. And it meant that Sally also an angel. They were guardian angel and had a couple of angel’s wings on their wrist, but that was a secret. Sally would dissapeared forever, if someone who believe that Sally wasn’t a human touched her wrist. Sally’s friend promised that he would bring other angel’s book to Sally. So, she could become an angel again. Sally kept her secret herself, but unfortunately John knew what Sally said to her friend that Sally was an angel and she would protect herself so people couldn’t know the truth. Although John knew Sally’s secret, he also kept it himself and protected Sally as well as he can. Their friends didn’t realize that Sally wasn’t a human, but Jim and his friends realized. They suspicious because some of Sally’s behaviors were strange. For example, Sally never wore short sleeve shirt or t-shirt and she always avoid if someone grabbed or touched her wrist.
One day, Jim and his friends tried to trapped Sally. When they saw Sally was alone at the library corner, they came and grabbed Sally’s wrist. Sally shocked and tried to scream, but Neil covered her mouth. John came after he had seen Jim and his friends entered the library. Max grabbed her wrist and opened the wrist button with force.  John scream at Max to stop him, but it useful. Because they’d already seen the angel’s sign.
So, what do you think the next part tell about? Will Sally dissapear forever? If you’re so curious, so wait for the next part guys. Thank you for your time to read my blog. And if you have some critics and suggestions, please give a comment. See you guys…

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