Friday, March 4, 2016

People Around Me :)

Hello guys!!!
Welcome again to my blog!!! In this part I will tell you about people around me, especially all about my family and my friends whom I love . I will start with my family. I have a hero for me and my family. He is my father. My father’ name is Andreas Sumardjoko, but people called him Mr. Joko. He was born in Yogyakarta on 27th September 1961. He has black curly hair and it make my hair bit same with my father. His eyes are round black eyes. He has minus on his eyes too so that he have to wears glasses every time because he has short-sighted. If he didn’t wear glasses he wouldn’t see anything clearly and his eyes look very small. He has brown skin too, like my other family’ members. He has an oval face and it makes me different from him. When people first met him, they wouldn’t be brave to talk with him because his face looks like people from another island. They afraid that my father can’t speak Javanese, but in fact my father is from Yogyakarta so he can speak Javanese very well. I don’t know his height and his weigh, but I only know that he is very tall. He is the tallest in my family.
He is a friendly and easygoing person. He also like to talks and jokes with other people. He is very patient person. He never got mad or yelled at me or my sister. He always told us to be patient. He always teaches us another knowledge with patiently. I love him very much because he is the best father for me and my sister. Unfortunately my father passed away ten years ago. Although he passed away, I’m sure that he always sees his daughters and his wife. :) :)

My father
I have one motivator in my life. She is my mother. She isn’t a rich or beautiful person. She’s also isn’t popular person, but I love her very much. My mother’s name is Agnes Lilik Winarti and usually people called her Mrs. Agnes or Mrs. Win. She was born in Malang on 25th October 1964. She has short  black straight hair, she always has short hair because she doesn’t like long hair too much. She has round black eyes, too. She also wears glasses sometimes. She also has brown skin. She has a round face like me and my sister. Her weigh is 57 kg, but I didn’t know her height. I only know that she is the tiniest in my family. :)
She is a friendly, patient and hardworking person. She is single parent and works alone to support my family after my father passed away. She got married again in 2007, and it means I have stepfather. Although I have stepfather, he doesn’t help my mother very much because he doesn’t have persistent job. My mother is my motivation’s because she always tells us to be hardworking and never complains about everything, She always tells us to be grateful for everything that God has given to us, so we can make our dream come true. :) :)

Me and my mother
Then I’ll tell about my sister. My sister name is Cicilia Novi Wulandari and usually people called her Cicil or Novi. She was born in Malang on 14th November 1992. She has black straight hair like my mother and that make a bit different from mine. She also has round black eyes. She wears glasses too, since she was in 2nd grade of Elementary School. Her weigh is 54 kg and her height is a about of 160-161 cm.
She is a shy person. She didn’t like to talk too much, she is the opposite of me. Sometimes my mother and I have to ask her if she looks upset or sad, because she never tells us abouther problem and her situation if we didn’t ask her. Sometimes she may become a very lazy person, but usually we do the housework together. I don’t care about her personality, what I know is she is my sister who loves me and I love her too. :) :)

Me and my sister

Now I’ll continue with my friends around me. I have many friends around me, They are my Childhood` friends, my church` friends, my Elementary School' friends, my Junior High School' friends, my Senior High School' friends and also my College' friends. In my College' friends I have six friends who usually with me. They are my classmate too. I have others College' friends too, but I only tell about them who closer with me than the others. Six friends that I've told before are my friends who usually or maybe I can call it always, come to my boarding house when we have free time. We usually watch movies, sleep, eat or just gather to talk and joke. ! I can’t tell their personalities one by one. When I was child, I never played withgirls, because in my village there wasn’t many girls, so I used to play with boys and that is make my character like a boy. Hahahaha!! When I was in elementary school, my friends always comment about my style, because I like short hair at that timeand that really make me look like a boy. All I know is they are my friends who always stay with me in every situation(I hope so) and become my other family. :):)
My Senior High School' friends


My College' friends


That all about people around me whom I love very much. Thank you guys for your time to read my blog, please give feedback for me or comment to improve my writing skill. God bless you and see you next time guys!! ^0^

13 comments:

  1. Your mom is really a strong and wonder woman. I amazed with your mom.
    Just for suggestion you should to imitate and learn with your mom

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  3. Great story cat...
    I just want to give you some quick comments about your writing if I may. The first is you have to pay attention of the spacing between the paragraph. Second, since it is an assignment about describing your family and friends, maybe you should add more about what they like and how their personality. That is all from me, thank you.
    PS : i will stay with you in every situation ;D

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    1. thank u Nina for your comments :)
      I'll pay attention on it :)
      thank u for stay with me .
      yeeey :D

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  4. Nice story Cat, I think you have describe your family well. But I think you should give more detail about your stepfather. Hahaha, I know you don't like your stepfather. But no matter how, it is your father.
    PS 2: I will stay with you too in every situation. :)

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    1. hahaha, thank u for your comment Tyt :D
      And, you know me so well about my story Tyt . :D
      thank u for being my friends in every situation :)

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  5. Your story touches me a lot. It reminds me of being thankful to the god because he gives me complete parents. I feel sorry about your loss, but I like your spirit to struggle in this rough world by making your mother as your motivator. Good writing, and just a little bit seasoning that can be added here: pay attention to capitalized letters and space between words.

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    1. really, Tris?
      I feel so proud if my story can reminds other people of being thankful . :)
      thank u for your comment Tris .

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  6. Nice story Cat!. Your description is well. Just pay more attention on the tenses especially simple present, and about capitalized letters also about spacing and spellings. You can use the "preview" feature before you publish the post. Also you can turn on your "auto-correct", so you can decrease any miss-spelling.

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    1. thank u for your comment Jeff .
      And I'll pay attention on the tense, capitalized letters, spacing and spellings . :)

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  8. Very good story Cat! I can't imagine, If I were you. You are very strong girl I've ever met. I like your spirit to make your lovely mother proud of you. You have to thankful to the God because God gave you a strong woman like your mother. Perhaps I have to thankful to the God too, that God still gives me complete parents. I want to give you a suggestion, pay attention to capitalized letters so that won't be any mistake. That's all for me. I will stay with you in every situation:) Take care!

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    1. yeeey .
      I also feel so proud Fani, cause my story can reminds other people of being thankful .
      Love your parents Fani :)
      thank u for you comment .
      And thank u for stay with me :)

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